Wow.. i thought that my animatic would be bad seeing that last time as i let my friends see it i didnt really get the reaction that i wanted.. but today they were laughing.. hahaha.. not suppose to laugh though.. hmmm.. comments given my lecturer that the paparrazi may not be applicable as i am targettin young range of children. Ahh oh gosh while waiting for my turn i was really cold and in fact caught a fever.
It goes to show i need to rest le... hahahah
oo also, they commented about my pacing that my ending was rather abrupt that my words at the back should not put the word smile at the back.. hmm oh not forgetting for the gantt chart we also have to include the time where we had to do report. think almost everyone forgotten bout it.. yupie..
oh hanis, laurie, kala and honey suggested that my ending should be related to studies instead. lik a huge book wanting to eat her with those chim words coming out.. hanis also suggested that mayb gt alot of books stacked up revealing a teacher at the end.
Also, alan mentioned that the part where the girl was supposingly crowded have to appear more crowded as in really people pushin her around as it seems she can just look up and search for hope.
Something i would bear in mind,
Thanks so much for the effective feedbacks.
Not to mention Mr. Ronald also said that every fridae will be have presentation woot.. attendance will be taken.. hohoh
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